We
are learning to...
·
write a personal recount about something
we have done or experienced
Criteria:
·
have an opening statement
that tells who what and when
·
write the events in the order they
happened
·
have a conclusion or personal response
Playing Soccer
On Thursday my class played soccer with the coach. It was so much fun at soccer. We had to practise doing soccer, so we did practised with the coach. We practised so we can play soccer. I was practising and we started to play soccer. It was so much fun at soccer. We played a Zombie game. You had to save people from the Zombies. We stopped playing the Zombie game. We were running with the ball. The girls had one ball each. We played other games. The cheetahs had to kick the ball way. I became a cheetah. I was kicking lots of people's balls away. To become a cheetah you had to run with the ball and the cheetah had to kick the people's balls away from the cheetah. It was so much fun at soccer.
Teacher comment:
A good recount with a beginning, middle and end.
Next steps: Use some joining words so sentences are different lengths
Teacher comment:
A good recount with a beginning, middle and end.
Next steps: Use some joining words so sentences are different lengths
